A Poem

Same shit same toilet same game I gotta play today,

Praying to the sky to please flush the fuckin pain away,

Worlds weight on my shoulder, contemplating why I want to stay,

Forming deadly habits drink about a 5th of grain a day,

Numb myself into submission, on a suicidal mission,

Life is hot, gotta find a way to get up out the kitchen,

Funny thing though, through the tunnel I can see a light,

But I been running for miles man, sometimes it gets so hard to fight,

It’s like the perfect irony, don’t wanna stay, too scared to leave,

Living through the struggle makes it extra hard for me to be,

I can’t breathe… yo why these fucking clouds keep crowding me?

Its like I can peer through the bullshit and see the world’s fallacies,

Lie after lie after blatant bold faced lie,

cornered by deceit, I cant fight em so I wanna cry....

Damn that is some tight shit, Idk if you like rap but say that to a beat it'd sound tight I bet.

ye man dats some good shit u make make a rap bout it juss longer and add a lil more with a serious beat that would let people know its a story

Thanks guys

i dont like it
it sounds like an emo or something
ENJOY LIFE MAN SMOKE SOME GREEN AND THINK ABOUT THIS WILD WORLD AND ENJOY IT MAN GO FISHING OR SOMETHING DO SOMETHING CREATIVE TALKING TO GIRLS WILL REALLY MAKE YOUR LIFE BETTER

good shit man

hillgrower999 said:

i dont like it
it sounds like an emo or something
ENJOY LIFE MAN SMOKE SOME GREEN AND THINK ABOUT THIS WILD WORLD AND ENJOY IT MAN GO FISHING OR SOMETHING DO SOMETHING CREATIVE TALKING TO GIRLS WILL REALLY MAKE YOUR LIFE BETTER

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I will admit that I do have my "emo" moments.

I assume you are kind of young, because any man experienced with women will tell you that its not always the pussy party you thought it was going to be when you were a kid.

We all have dark times fam, and this was written during one of mine.

I appreciate your input though