My first LST

Hi everyone. I ended up with these really big plants.. (long story)... Anyway, I made a post about it and was suggested to try LSTing them. I did one and wanted to see what you guys thought about how I did it I want to fix any mistakes before i go onto the others.

Any help is greatly appreciated. Thank you!

are they in flower yet? if not then your gonna end up with 8ft plants lol, and the possibility of them already being rootbound. it looks like the one on the left is a kush? if so then unless your running over 1000w then i doubt youl see anything appear on the bottom few nodes. keep your eyes on them and trim off if theyre causing more damage than doin good! nothin worse than a plant puttin its effort into a node that wont produce anythin!