My first poem :)

OK, this is my first try at poetry, and I'm stoned as hell Comments welcome.

a mistic shadow,
on a lonely meadow
dawning light
shining full of color

can it be the shadow's call
shing upon me, upon us all,
sun's embrace, eternal light
green grass, the power of flight

a dawny shadow,
dimms of light
flying above
like a paper kite

simplest child, full of joy
smiling upon a toomb of light
indiand drums and the voices of Afrika
fly along the stream of light

Beauty above, come for me,
Beauty below, enlighten me
And set me free...
Set me free...

hmm i like it....

I like the lyrics. Which is really innovative. I have tried more to make good poem. But I have never matched the lyrics as well . So that The sounds of poem like spring check out.