nice track!
i think the mixing is excellent - good choice of instruments..
congrats if you recorded those vocals - very professional job! i thought though that they could have been more ethereal like the pads.. they sound very acoustic and true where i would expect more dense FX in this kind of genre..
it isn't really a genre that i listen to all of the time, but i like this a lot! it is great to see other folks on the board writing! i am on the cloud also - http://soundcloud.com/noahcohn