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r4in420

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Trapped in this room
I can't get out of
This terrible costume
Your always wondering whats above?
That mystical place you speak of
What if its artificial?

Like the concept of a plant
That grows in the ground
An amazing herb mankind found
Treating it like its the worst around
This world needs to get their heads Inbound
And realize the differences are profound

I can never stand
Someone who has only one view
Like a priest at a pew
Sitting there
Deep in prayer
Not accepting another view
Like its the devils taboo

I guess they will find
Whats actually true
When they finally pass through
And reluctantly construe

Open your mind
Buy into another kind
Expand your intelligence
Feel the relevance
Stop being so stubborn
Be happy you were born
In this world of hate
Nobody has time to wait
To see their fate

Everyday
New problems evolve
Some we ignore
Never resolve
Hold still for
United States of America
The god of war

In the end
Lets not pretend
The future of you and I
Torn away by a everlasting simplistic Lie

-Alex C. (|2A|N)
 
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