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danrasta

danrasta

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Sometimes I just sit and ponder life tryna get this shit right I wonder will I make it through this shite sick and tired of the stuff every day always tryna live up to what people expect from me hearing everything they say but I'm losing my way.

How do I change myself feel like I'm stuck on a shelf watching time go by while I sit and get high on everything I try and I can't deny that sometimes I wish I would die playing Russian roulette with this life of mine so I dish out another line and keep saying one last time

I have things to live for like this child of mine who's my pride and joy basically the apple my eye he's a reason to change a young lad with beast of a name a reason to step up my game so this my last rhyme about negative shit I beg of a bitch to give me strength in this shit.
 
mr sunshine

mr sunshine

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danrasta said:
Sometimes I just sit and ponder life tryna get this shit right I wonder will I make it through this shite sick and tired of the stuff every day always tryna live up to what people expect from me hearing everything they say but I'm losing my way.

How do I change myself feel like I'm stuck on a shelf watching time go by while I sit and get high on everything I try and I can't deny that sometimes I wish I would die playing Russian roulette with this life of mine so I dish out another line and keep saying one last time

I have things to live for like this child of mine who's my pride and joy basically the apple my eye he's a reason to change a young lad with beast of a name a reason to step up my game so this my last rhyme about negative shit I beg of a bitch to give me strength in this shit.
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U should stop the bitchin about the fucked up life you're living//around here a flying fucked is what we're giving..u spitting bullshit//don't tease Ho time to bite the bullet......my head is where demons hide ..ill stab your chest open and eat your insides...I love the skin when it rip.. your styles gayer then two guys sucking each other's dick. I kill and most pussys hate it// I'm sick like a leukemia patient//leaving the competition frustrated.
 
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Cpappa27

Cpappa27

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mr sunshine said:
U should stop the bitchin about the fucked up life you're living//around here a flying fucked is what we're giving..u spitting bullshit//don't tease Ho time to bite the bullet......my head is where demons hide ..ill stab your chest open and eat your insides...I love the skin when it rip.. your styles gayer then two guys sucking each other's dick. I kill and most pussys hate it// I'm sick like a leukemia patient//leaving the competition frustrated.
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Lololol that was great I needed a good laugh to start the day
 
caherbgrower

caherbgrower

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I like it. Sometimes you gotta speak your mind good or bad. Thanks for sharing your writing here. I know first hand it's not easy to put yourself out there like this.
 
hotshotisdashit

hotshotisdashit

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danrasta said:
Sometimes I just sit and ponder life tryna get this shit right I wonder will I make it through this shite sick and tired of the stuff every day always tryna live up to what people expect from me hearing everything they say but I'm losing my way.

How do I change myself feel like I'm stuck on a shelf watching time go by while I sit and get high on everything I try and I can't deny that sometimes I wish I would die playing Russian roulette with this life of mine so I dish out another line and keep saying one last time

I have things to live for like this child of mine who's my pride and joy basically the apple my eye he's a reason to change a young lad with beast of a name a reason to step up my game so this my last rhyme about negative shit I beg of a bitch to give me strength in this shit.
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Dude this is a grow sight. Post a rhyme about growing and smoking weed. Some uplifting shit. Look forward to the next rhyme.
 
dbkick

dbkick

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hotshotisdashit said:
Dude this is a grow sight. Post a rhyme about growing and smoking weed. Some uplifting shit. Look forward to the next rhyme.
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Not only that but the most uppity grow site around . This sounds more like a cry for help than anything. You won't find sympathy with the fucks that control this site.
My opinion of the lyrics.... needs some work but I'd gong mr sunshine before you.
Good luck.
 
mr sunshine

mr sunshine

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I'll rap Em up like a present/u in the presence of a king not a peasant.. I'm drilling mcs daily ain't it evident? ROLL IT UP, ROLL IT UP..represent. ..my flow so swole like it's heaven sent..smoking on my weed got me hella bent.
 
hotshotisdashit

hotshotisdashit

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Idk dbkick. I think they both got some potential. Cause sunshine seems nice too. Ok here db let's give em 12 hours. The one with the best weed song gets my vote. So by 8 pm have y'all bars together. A couple of paragraphs. Nothing too much.
 
dr.gonzo1

dr.gonzo1

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dbkick said:
Not only that but the most uppity grow site around . This sounds more like a cry for help than anything. You won't find sympathy with the fucks that control this site.
My opinion of the lyrics.... needs some work but I'd gong mr sunshine before you.
Good luck.
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Bullshit
 
dr.gonzo1

dr.gonzo1

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danrasta said:
Sometimes I just sit and ponder life tryna get this shit right I wonder will I make it through this shite sick and tired of the stuff every day always tryna live up to what people expect from me hearing everything they say but I'm losing my way.

How do I change myself feel like I'm stuck on a shelf watching time go by while I sit and get high on everything I try and I can't deny that sometimes I wish I would die playing Russian roulette with this life of mine so I dish out another line and keep saying one last time

I have things to live for like this child of mine who's my pride and joy basically the apple my eye he's a reason to change a young lad with beast of a name a reason to step up my game so this my last rhyme about negative shit I beg of a bitch to give me strength in this shit.
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Tnt is absolutely the place to post something like this.

For what it's worth, I liked it.
 
Unclebaldrick

Unclebaldrick

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danrasta said:
Sometimes I just sit and ponder life tryna get this shit right I wonder will I make it through this shite sick and tired of the stuff every day always tryna live up to what people expect from me hearing everything they say but I'm losing my way.

How do I change myself feel like I'm stuck on a shelf watching time go by while I sit and get high on everything I try and I can't deny that sometimes I wish I would die playing Russian roulette with this life of mine so I dish out another line and keep saying one last time

I have things to live for like this child of mine who's my pride and joy basically the apple my eye he's a reason to change a young lad with beast of a name a reason to step up my game so this my last rhyme about negative shit I beg of a bitch to give me strength in this shit.
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Maybe you should have posted your next one...
 
hotshotisdashit

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