My first trance synth line

[timeismoney1]

Well its my first. Hows it? Sorry its not a continueious loop. Imagine that

So how could i improve on this to make it stand out more

http://tinypic.com/r/ta4emq/7

 

[bryon209]

sounds coo keep workin on it

 

[see4]

omg! someone else just discovered the loop track #2 on Fruity Loops! zomg!!

totally gnarly dude!

 

[timeismoney1]

Well would you just look at that

 

[The Cryptkeeper]

Got a tracking number for me buddy? Still got MDPV?

 

[worm5376]

Not to jack your thread but check out my brother at a party eating up the wheels on some serious shit

Your shit don't sound bad at all man. Keep at it.

[video=youtube;RWmiH6uj-Y8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWmiH6uj-Y8[/video]

 

[timeismoney1]

Got a tracking number for me buddy? Still got MDPV?

Mdpv no

Tracking no. I emailed you at 9. Wait 3 hours and by the time you replyed i was tripping! I might pop a xanax or 2 hurry and scadaddle to po. Brb

 

[see4]

Well would you just look at that

Well played sir. Cool loop though, Im just fuckin with you. I havent used Fruity Loops in years..

 

[The Cryptkeeper]

Mdpv no

Tracking no. I emailed you at 9. Wait 3 hours and by the time you replyed i was tripping! I might pop a xanax or 2 hurry and scadaddle to po. Brb

 

[Benassi]

Sick! an 8bit beat loop... now that's good Trance!

 

[racerboy71]

nice time.. the only things that i could suggest to make it better would be to add some more layers to it.. some more sounds, what ever floats your boat, but to me, the more layers a track has, the better it gets.. and of course, i love me shit dark, but it doesn't have to be dark to be good..
maybe find a vocal track or something that would fit and sample that and add it in.. add some drops to it as well would be another good way to add to it.. and a nice wooble or two..

 

[timeismoney1]

Thanks. Yeah more layers is better. Time to make a song!