Basho is Bored (The Haiku Game)

RavenMochi

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I search for alice
"off with his head" a voice says
I found the red queen

I run from her grasp
hoping to find my alice
the cards hunt me down

at the tea party
I find refuge at long last
but I cannot stay

they will find me there
so I chase the white rabbit
he led me astray
 

tyler.durden

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I search for alice
"off with his head" a voice says
I found the red queen



I run from her grasp
hoping to find my alice
the cards hunt me down

at the tea party
I find refuge at long last
but I cannot stay

they will find me there
so I chase the white rabbit
he led me astray
Impressive Haiku,
Alice will have to think twice.
Now, Run Rabbit, Run!
 

Metasynth

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Word Count5 Syllable Count6 Character Count (alphanumeric)17Mean syllables per word1.20Mean characters per word3.40

Very sorry friend
Six syllables is not right
Looking for seven
 

RavenMochi

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cryptkeeper can't count
believes machine is flawless
he cannot program

he then makes it clear
a caveman is more advanced
then a cryptkeeper
 

RavenMochi

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rain falls from the sky
angry gods show their anger
why can't they get high?

waiting is a hell
for those who lack much patience
I lack much patience
 
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