Again, it's not a song, it's you just messing around. Writing or learning a tune requires the discipline to pick apart a few measures at time and drill them into the ground until they're perfect. It's slow going and often maddening, but that's the way to gain technique. You don't seem disciplined in your practice, if you just doodle around all the time you'll never really improve. Also, scales and etudes the necessary building blocks of musical technique, you should start there...
U r right sir..i am doodlin after beer n weed...and yes sir i did scales etudes .n a whole lot more.its just that i decided to improvise my own stuff...i am self taught..mainly books and a whole lot of listenin.i dont read notes that well..so wat u hear is years of listenin to all kinds of stuff.let me show u n example of a piece i used to play in my peak.note for note.by my hero
Laurnce juber. here is another hero of mine.and yes i play this song as well.took me some time.but i nailed it. course i can never sound Exactly like these guys.but if i played in the dark.it would sound like both laurnce n eric are playing after tokin!
.but lets say it sounds close enuf..maybe next il post my covers
But cover tunes r a dime a dozen.so i do alcohol induced.weed inspired improv doodlin.and i guess u r right.after a nite of intoxicated inspiration i shld sober up n work on creatin a proper structrerd peice!
..a big thanks to all at riu who had to listen to my sillymadness!.il work on a proper song for riu soon!wish me luck!tnks alot guys..i have tripped here.cried about my gitlfriend here.learnt horticulture.and made so many good frnds!..love u all...soon il write a song for sunni.il cal it song for vgg..vegan ganja goddess.
