Need constructive critisism please

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timeismoney1

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My first song i put together. please be kind and leave any comments. and tips on how to improve thanks!

its pretty basic. next song im going to add more to integrate everything

http://tinypic.com/player.php?v=2h4e48z&s=7

I called it My Paradise. When i put it together the whole time it felt like i was being took away to a happy place i never want to leave so yeah enjoy :)

EDIT : Thanks everyone for the likes! Really pumps me up now :) If anyone is a bit interested to download it heres a link.

http://www.mediafire.com/?14zasgk17dh5rxt
 
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timeismoney1

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oh man im glad 1 person liked it :) i was a little nervous after listening to Dj Tiesto and Armin Van Buuren and Above and Beyond all the time, i felt it was crap. But there hella good at what they do and im starting off. Thanks!
 
MediMary

MediMary

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Can I just be a prick and pretend to offer advise while putting you down or are you only accepting constructive criticism?
 
ganjames

ganjames

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i like it.

at first i just that it was alright but it got to the end and i caught myself jammin'
make some more, do a little mixtape and put that shit on itunes so i can jam in the whip.
 
RyanTheRhino

RyanTheRhino

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if you u are going to with this style of music you need to make it much more dub-step. if you want to make money dub step is the new club fad.[video=youtube;oZkzcm7ubQg]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=oZkzcm7ubQg[/video]
 
canuckgrow

canuckgrow

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sorry man made me wanna smash my puter speakers LOL......Glad you get enjoyment out of making a song though.....Give me a 12 minute guitar solo with some smashing drums and you will strike my chord.
 
StonedGuru

StonedGuru

Active Member
tbh I felt a build up but didnt get anywhere, need to break it down, drop in a base line, ramp it up, hardstyle baby! Musically wise though I think its pretty amazing, then again Im as musically talented as a brick.
 
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