RHYME IT-Read first post then make the last post.

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wow I just wrote the illest shit back to this pussy ass indeed nigga and my laptop died right when I was wrapping it up... fuck writing another rap, I'm better than you and I know it and if anybody really wants me to prove then I'll show it.

marijaneindeed said:

haha, im not trying to be you, but why you gotta talk bout my preggo dawg, thats it your through, you can retaliate but it jsut wont do, because i fucked your grandma through and through, she didnt have enough holes for me, so i took my gun and blew, and fucked every single bullet hole till it turned blue, the story i tell is true, you oughta know, because you caught me fuckin your moms to, she screamed, i went deeper, rape from tha muthafuckin grim reaper, then i blew ya dads head off, another eternal sleeper...whats that ya hear, not a single sound because i massacred ya whole family with one single round, how did i do it, well thats my secret, kidnap is my favorite, becasue i be creepin...naw forreal, though, step ya game, ya rhymes are terrible, they need a changeup, your like a suicidal emo boy, who needs a bang cut, gets picked on at school all because, you flame up, got fucked in tha ass, and now you walk with a strange strut, all tha females in ya family, will get banged up, sucky sucky 5 dollars, they nothin but sluts, sorry i had to end ya lyrical life, so abrupt, sittin in a coffin with ya eyes sown shut...and all ya organs missin, who can you trust, i can be in ya closet WAITING TO FUCK YOU UP YA BUTT. like

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Is he kinda like a big deal?
Is it his raps i can feel?
...nope not mary jane
just trying to steal my fame
im the king of this fucking rap game
5 rhymes deep
aint non of them lame
but yours? shits weak
ha you must be greek
talking bout butt sex
get your bottle of becks
stand in the mirror and flex
wishing upon a star
to go as far
as me
but ya rhymes make me wanna pee
they so funny
how can a little bitch kill
ha you scared of a bunny
You better light up
because this is gonna take awhile
my goal is to make everyone smile
by embarrassing this guy
I can see him now
diaper in hand
wishing to be a man
but he cant because
he doesnt have the fortitude
ha im done rapping about this dude
just gonna spit it so fresh so clean
im single not looking for a queen
All i want is the green
stack it to the sky
tha widow makes me fly
im outta this world
give the goose a swirl
then pour it on ya girl
make her strip
show her tits
play with her clit
pull out my dick
im the nigga she
wants to be wit
but shes got you
who doesnt have a clue
dont hold your breath
your turning blue
haha papa smurf
thought you knew
no balls since birth
you lookin at my girth
heterophobics
breaking a sweat
like you doing aerobics
dont stare at me
youll end up on ya knees
sucking on my b's
they fill up your jaws
hold on ill stop for applause
but im not done yet
this freestyle is long as hell
but im not even breaking a sweat
give me a beat so i dont have to spit acapella
then ill really show you what i can do fella

END.

mahlye said:

Indeed, what's up nigga why aren't you chilling cuz?
I hold you down and then you talk about feeding me slugs...
but I'm so hot, your just not, I'm like smoldering lava or lights above 100,000 watts
keep on talking bitch, but your rapping skills suck more than dick
your worse than shit, please man quit
only thing hood about you is the ONE OVER YOUR CLIT
I don't even need to write, I do better when I freestyle
fucking with me is a worse mistake then your preggo's child

so fall back

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Haha owned

mahly, thats an excuse, and puff yo shit was straight up lame, and lucas, i done slaughtered you....im the best.......seriously though, none of yall can beat me....

Damn dude you sure scared me!

.. Ha, you know im the best so just admit it.

He just raps the same shit over and over like, "I slaughter you bitch, I'm a trailer park hick" He gets retarded with it.

indeed, that's no excuse nigga. I find it funny that you think your the best with your third grade rhymes, but if that does anything for your self esteem then go ahead and think that.

[Lucas];2459548 said:

He just raps the same shit over and over like, "I slaughter you bitch, I'm a trailer park hick" He gets retarded with it.

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his raps are old, collecting dust, growing mold
everyone knows he's fake, his bull shit lines can't be sold
the whole game knew he'd fuck up from the time he enrolled
we all pushed him in a corner, he's the type that gets controlled
pull the mask off this nigga and tell the people, "behold"
now everyone is waiting for his demise to unfold
he needs to take our advice, don't rap, withhold
he doesn't know gun play, this niggas trying to be bold
he can have the bronze, but I only rock the gold
I'm sick, I'm cancer, your just a common cold
still going with the first line, this scheme won't fold
I can be violent too, but hardly let that side take ahold
bitch don't be knave, learn to behave
I'd like to air him out and take piss on his grave
rest in piss, there's a place in hell for pussy's who talk shit
he might come across my niggas, who have fallen, trapped in the abyss
he needs to think twice before he tries to fuck with this
and yall might have friends doing in time in jail, but nigga I have friends doing life in hell
I used to be there with em, dropping shells
but overtime I watched as each one of them fell
now my memories of them lay in the streets where I dwell
he probably don't know what that life is like, I think about that shit every time I freestyle or write
but he talks a hard game, none of us care
we murder people son, no hospital beds, no wheel chairs
he'll need a bouquet of flowers and a nice suit to wear
because we'd kill him in the suns brightest glare
drag him through his own block as everyone stares
leave him on his doorstep and let him decompose there
this bitch aint the best, he talks shit now but the other day this kid sent me a friend request
he's trying so hard to be someone he's not, he's becoming obsessed
I bet he didn't count on his lies being addressed
we all found out he's a bitch nigga, but who would have guessed?
he reads our raps and becomes too stressed
tries to come back at us but nobody's impressed
thugs always weed out the fake, check them, give em a test
and if when they fail that cat ends up with stab wounds to his chest
the shit I say is true, but it's just in protest
this isn't my best, but he still lost, failure is just hard to digest
I don't even need to try and there's still no contest
now we're all staring at him, he's being assessed
all of us think your whack son, that's something we've all expressed
stay in your corner, sitting there feeling distressed
you should fall back, give up, you gotta divest
or you can meet me in the streets, that's not something I suggest
in honesty, this whole beef is lame
I don't write for battles, I don't want that shit on my name
so if you come back, come only with your best lines, I'll do the same

that rap had potential but seriously dog its a rap not a story. ...wish i had time to write something but i have to run

Lmao mahlye! that was dope! "this bitch aint the best, he talks shit now, but the other day this kid sent me a friend request " LOL
indeed, yo, check ya rectum.... i think you leavin a trail of blood behind from dem raps, SON !

Ok yall lets get lifted
we now know who can spit it
so rip it if ya gifted
cause you know who shit it
broke the scale n almost flipped it
all i need is one hit
and my mind dont quit
its races and paces
around you rappers
in several places
the crowd before me
all i see is faces
they want it
they need it
as they stand
in the same spaces
rocking back and forth
from the south and the north
everyone can feel it
when i open the door
i step through
silence amung us
then it hits you like a bus
the beat so hard
no one can touch us
get ya lighters up
if you dont give a fuck
i scan the crowd for
some hoes ta suck
or fuck, shit i dont care
as long as they got a phat butt
i gotta get my nut
because if not
its your throat im gonna cut
haha sike i aint no ganster
but im def not a wankster
just a preppy white boy
who would like to thank ya
for this banging as site
that teachs ya to grow ganja

Ok, enough evil in my raps, it still doesnt change the fact that you yall rap crap, but you want me to change up, well im down with that, i can rap about any subject, except being in a trap, because i dont sell drugs, but if im forced i will pump slugs, i dont say im hard, or any type of thug, but do you know anyone who could do it like me and flip like my tounge....i dont think so, therefore im puttin my shit to tha max, my lyrics step on you so hard it breaks ya back, change tha track, to any beat i rip tha rap, to get tha stacks, my music can sell out like crack and get everybody on tact....so just chiilout and smoke a blunt, smoke and grow for fun, lets choke and toke on one and let tha smoke smack ya lungs, before ya endup bein hung, and advise against gettin strung, ruin ya life and get stung, im not a chump, im just more lyrical then any of you punks, jsut like tha 70's we can bring tha funk, or get up to time and get crunk....just like martin luther king, i had a dream that my lyrics will set ya free, blaze tha tree, i mean shit IN A WAY WE ALL FAMILY.

how was that one? no murder.

Shouldn't you be preparing for your imaginary kid?

LMAO! i read that thread bout you and your "kid" indeed... lol. you got mass peeps pissed off at you, callin you a liar n a bitch and all sorts of shit! WTF? they
cant all be crazy.... congrats if you are truly having a child soon, and if you made it up and lied, may you rot in a firey dark pit in hell!

marijaneindeed said:

how was that one? no murder.

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as long as you aren't saying your better than everyone here

i take my time to perfect my craft
from the simplest rhymes, to the most complex crimes
i pull it off fast, talkin shit?
blow it out ur ass
yal dudes are gay like maryjaneindeed
young, n lying about havin a seed
im on my grown man shit, doin it my way
no lie, found out my child gonna be born
on MY birthday!
yea, thats Sagittarius style
yal know im wild wit the words
fuck battlin, ill stomp ur face
on the curb, then, light the herb

but i need to relax my anger
cuz i aint tryin to put my kid in danger
cant stay in the streets
wit all the fiends n freaks
gotta stay outta trouble, n pay them fines
gotta stop hustlin them white lines
cant keep catchin cases, n doin bids
shit, ima be changin diapers n
buyin bibs
all for my kid, this aint no joke
damn, this kid gonna have me broke! lol

fuck it, im tired of typin...

no time needed, open my mouth and niggas are defeated
make an entrance, bitches stand at attention till I tell em to be seated
fuckdapolice, a new life is a blessing
remember to relax whenever the pressure has you stressing
good luck with your kid homie, congratulations
soon you'll hold a child of your own creation
never give in to frustrations, your a man and can deal with any complications
exceed your own expectations, set a path for yourself and reach that destination

I used to wonder what it would be like
to watch my own kids learning how to ride bikes
but to me, being married is being stuck
can't stay with one bitch, every night I want a new one to fuck
that's just how I live, I like to have fun, that's just what it is
and all the effort I give eventually amounts to who I am within
maybe my perspective will change, but for now the idea of marriage seems strange
I'm not even with having a girlfriend, all I wanna do is go to the club and find a bitch I can befriend
to no end, no limitations, friends with benefits, and then former relations
and I don't think that's wrong, even if she's bad, can't keep her around for too long
that's just how I does this, fuck her and her sister, and probably they're cousin
aint no shame in that, every nigga wants to have a couple dimes in his sack

I gotta take a piss

mahlye said:

no time needed, open my mouth and niggas are defeated
make an entrance, bitches stand at attention till I tell em to be seated
fuckdapolice, a new life is a blessing
remember to relax whenever the pressure has you stressing
good luck with your kid homie, congratulations
soon you'll hold a child of your own creation
never give in to frustrations, your a man and can deal with any complications
exceed your own expectations, set a path for yourself and reach that destination

I used to wonder what it would be like
to watch my own kids learning how to ride bikes
but to me, being married is being stuck
can't stay with one bitch, every night I want a new one to fuck
that's just how I live, I like to have fun, that's just what it is
and all the effort I give eventually amounts to who I am within
maybe my perspective will change, but for now the idea of marriage seems strange
I'm not even with having a girlfriend, all I wanna do is go to the club and find a bitch I can befriend
to no end, no limitations, friends with benefits, and then former relations
and I don't think that's wrong, even if she's bad, can't keep her around for too long
that's just how I does this, fuck her and her sister, and probably they're cousin
aint no shame in that, every nigga wants to have a couple dimes in his sack

I gotta take a piss

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respect.... but i aint feelin that 'nigga' shit, u need to chill wit usin that