Something I wrote the other day.. what you think?

Just go ahead, throw this life away cause it's all I can stand, damn right I feel this way and there's nothing you can say..


So don't pretend this is something you could fight for, save that for one you could hate, it's better when you're near.. but I fear the sun will shine if you're not here..


Don't bother, you never could, just save your lies, cuz you were the best and I don't need that..

So don't say it's something you could fight for, save it for one you could hate.. Things are better with you near, but the sun could shine brighter when you're not here...


I could onto every faded memory, but I'd rather smile another day.. I could never be enough for you, and I find that fine by me.. you were the one so cold, and I still suffer for the way that I am.


What ya think? Please, if you're going to criticize me, do it constructively

Badass. Put that to a three-chord guitar, work with it, you'll find songwriting quite interesting, everyone does.

thats what I'd like to do.. but I don't know how to play.. i'm learning.. but it's been put on hold, as I don't have a guitar at the moment..

haha I seem to recall we live near one another. This conversation goes to PM.

32 people looked at it, but only one could comment? Ok...

Not my style personally, but i'm sure you wouldn't want it to be.

to each his own..